The Bright Screen

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 19:39 -- hope03


United States
34° 3' 21.294" N, 117° 19' 35.0004" W

All gathered around
Our curse the plasma bright screen
Our entertainment has changed

All from Satellite
From one network to more
The H.D. black box

Companies have grown
Television has flourished
Production has changed



I like that it was short and sweet but made you question so much more. I enjoyed your piece very much. You could probably expend it even further by talking about the outcome for everything else because of these things. I would love to hear what you have to say about that.


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