a bad break up
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it all started with a text of baby
not good morning as ritual courtesy one acknowledges to a human being
i text back saying baby, i'm cooking breakfast
my mind wasn't thinking anything at that moment
at that time
next text reads
i think we need to break up
i'm letting you down
i paused like a mimb that stands still motionless
i text back what? why?
i outreach to get to the bottom of this misogynous tabloid of why you want to end this great relationship
we all go through something in our lives
it's what we do each day to get through
now, if you truly wanted out, then all you have to do is say it
this was not in your vocabulary because you fulfill expectations of what every angry woman say about men
there are no good men out there
what you fail to realize is that you didn't break that cycle of guys who all they wear is a dunce cap
when i wasn't the disappointment you expected
you didn't know what to do except find every excuses in the world to push me away
and protect your vulneribility from your expression of love you don't even claim
yet, i wasn't that diamond in the rough
i am a precious gold that's rare and delicate
and you attempt to make this gold a fool by selling it to someone you try to con
i'm more shinier than 18 karat gold
now out of left field, you weren't ready for a relationship
been there, done that
not saying anything out in the ordinary
but instead, you permitted your emotional disturbances to cloud your passion
on embracing of this man as the true defintion of the man
women please learn a valuable lesson
don't express the typical notion of there is no good men
there are
the problem is that you fail to go beyond than three blocks of your own neighborhood
or a club full of guys that all they bring is recipricate drama in which you don't know what happiness feels like even if it kicked you
someday, a woman will see me not as trash
but a treasure that embodies the only key she knows how to open
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This was just crazy man, great stuff. As another poet, I always loved the way we can symbolize a meaning by using words as our descriptions.
OMG i know how that feel and Break ups can be difficult but it takes a hard fall for someone else to come and grab your hand and help you.You might be going through that fall but just know everything happens for a reason and even if it seem like what is the real reason just know something better will be coming your way.Build from this moment and know that if your heart is good and full of love it won't be long before someone else comes to hold your heart and cherish it like you deserve .
I'm going through the worst moment of my life with a relationship and I already have a hard time to open up to people and to have that person that i pushed away only makes me want it back so i know how that can feel .
Keep your head up and grow from this moment
Check out my poetry when you get a chance thank you
i think you are an amazing writer and person :)
I been doing horrible life has been crazy and i feel everything emotional is falling apart.Its like on the outside i am happy and full energy the person i want to be. Then i have the inside that is breaking apart .And i been trying to do better with sharing my emotions but all i do is close up from the world .
Sorry about my emotional rollercoaster
how are you MVP!?
You are a great poet i've only read three so far but i feeeeelll you literally. For every great man there is a great woman and I know without a doubt you will find her, better yet she will find you