"Active" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 6/12/2013

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United Kingdom

Ya Know They Say When You Age …
That You Should Stay … " ACTIVE " … !!!

Now Physically That Makes Sense To Me …

But NOT IF Mentally Your Mind State's Captive … !!!!!
Reactive And Lacking In Thoughts ... Attracting …

A Balanced Life In … " Body And Mind " …

So I KEEP Mine As In My Brain ...
Active And Inclined To ELEVATE ...
And Therefore Maintain A STRONG Mind State … !!!!!

A Thing I Exhibit In My Wordplay … !!!
Whenever I Visit An ... A4 Page … !!!!!
And Let My Lyrics Become An Array …
of Rhymes Exquisite When They Are Displayed …

My Words Become Active Whenever They're … " Acted " ...
Or Simply Heard Via Spoken Word From Me … " Big Virge " …

See Activation of Thought I Now Explore ...
As A Way To KEEP Active And NOT GET Bored … !!!!!

As I Said Before I DO NOT Ignore … !!!
A NEED To Do MORE Than Exercise On Floors … !!!

I Do That TOO … !!!!!
But Don't EVER ABUSE …
The Tool That When USED …

Activates Tissues NOT USED By … " Fools " … ?!?

Who DISMISS Thought To IMPRESS These Whores … !?!

FLEXING Muscle And STRONG Skin Tones …
So That They Can Couple … Activating Hormones … !!!!!

I'd Rather Be Humble Than Activate TUSSLES That DON'T BREED Chuckles … !!!
When They OPEN Dark Tunnels Where Fellas Use KNUCKLES …
Activating TROUBLE Because They Got Rumbled When Having MORE THAN Cuddles … !!!

With Girls Whose Main Trait Is To ACTIVATE More Than Their PROSTATE … !!!!!

See I Activate Levels DEEP Inside My Mental … !!!
That Takes Lead From The Pencils of Horny Lil' Devils … !!!!!!

Therefore I Stay STRONG And AVOID Problems … !!!
That Come From Loose Thongs And Violent Wrongs ... !!!

I'd Rather Write Words And Poetic Verse …
That Act Like Prophylactics And Give Disease COLLAPSES … !!!

Because My Wordplay SNATCHES Whips And Gives Out Hangings ... !!!
To Cats Thinking They MASSIVE When What They Are Is … TRAGIC … !!!!
TRAGIC Little Captives Using FOOLISH Tactics That Put Them On My Blacklist … !!!!
of Those Worthy of LASHES See Me I Prey Like MANTIS Or Like Man From ATLANTIS … !!!!

I Pray Upon An AXIS ... Symmetrical And Balanced … !!!!!!
UNABLE To Be Challenged By IGNORANCE That's Captive ...
In Minds Now LOST And ... SAVAGE ... !!!

Long After I'm NONACTIVE …
My Words Will Still Be ACTIVE … !!!!!!

That's Why I Write And Post Online … !!!
So That When I Have Physically Died …

These Words I Find Inside My Mind ….
WILL Stay ALIVE … " IMMORTALISED " … !!!!!!

BEYOND My Life ….
That's Where My Pride TRULY Resides ….

In A Place Where Thoughts …
CREATE Wordplay Beyond The Wars We See Today … !!!!!!

I Hope One Day People Will Say …. ?!?

.... "That Big Virge Man, played an active hand,
.... in the betterment of, our race of humans,
.... and left us seeds, to activate dreams of finding peace,
.... and living for more than, fights on streets, and vanity !
.... That Man for sure, wrote poetry,
.... that's active now he's no longer around !"

But While i'm here My Mind Adheres …
To Activating Verse That CLEARLY HURTS … !!!

Chickens And Jerks Whose Form of Work … ?!?
Activates NONSENSE Causing PROBLEMS ... !!!

I Have An Active Body And An ACTIVE Mind … !!!
So My Work's FAR FROM Shoddy Because It Feeds The Blind …
With The Kind of Insights That DON'T Invite ... !!!!!

IGNORANCE and PRIDE To Be Aligned With A Positive Life …
The Words I Rhyme Activate Like STARS Shine In The Night ... !!!
Because … From The Dark There MUST COME LIGHT … !!!!!

So As I Approach These Last Few Lines …
NO Time To Reproach or Criticise … !!!

Because These Words AREN'T … " Faddish " … !!!
And Won't Take ALL Your Bandwidth … !!!!!

I Am A Wordsmith Whose Pen Writes Scripts …
of TRUE LYRICS … " PROACTIVE " … !!!!!

These Words Are NOT Just RANTINGS …
They're DRIVEN And ... EXPANSIVE … !!!!!!!

And PROVE That Like My … " Writtens' "
When Big Virge Was Here … " LIVING " …

My Brain, Body & Spirit ...
Were Attached To Being …

….. " ACTIVE " …..

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