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Thu, 02/06/2014 - 01:20 -- Nadiap


Taking pictures half naked

Smoking and drinkin to try and forget your father left

Breaking your mothers heart for getting suspended from school for being half baked

Failing classes because you're partying all weekend

Not trying to study beause you told your friends at the scene

Kids these days want the fame without the work

to play before they try, but

at the rate this generation is going, we're lucky if we don't all die.

Our deaths wouldn't from old age and disease,

but from new guns being firing over b*!$^hes.

My hopes for my generation is to put down the drugs and pick up some ambition

If only these oblivious children would listen.

 

 

Comments

Royal Blood

Poem is great :) where did ya get the jazz demo from its real nice

Nadiap

Thank you :) I made the beat myself. 

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