Poems from seabreeze13
Hola fellow poets, I'm Seabreeze :)
As a sophmore in high school right now, I'm just trying to figure everything out (life, drama, why my favorite Chinese place won't deliver) and a lot of that affects my writing.
Please comment! Critique is wanted, no, extremely NEEDED. Thanks :)
You are the music of my heart,
Each beat mistaken for a murmur,
By every tone-deaf stethoscope,
But I hear the melody.
Your tuning...
Promises of a good time
Make my blood burn
As his words ignite the ashes
Of a burnt out flame
From long ago.
Crooked fingers and
Smiles...
Show me how to forget
But to not let these memories fade into my mind
Blurring the lines
Until it all just turns into one big lump
Stuck...
Dear Person Who Deserves to Die a Fiery Death While Simultaneously Being Eating By a Shark,
I know the last time we talked was unpleasant...
You are many things.
But cold, grey, and metallic are not any of them.
Your hands give a shock like lightning.
But they haven’t...