Poems from seabreeze13
Hola fellow poets, I'm Seabreeze :)
As a sophmore in high school right now, I'm just trying to figure everything out (life, drama, why my favorite Chinese place won't deliver) and a lot of that affects my writing.
Please comment! Critique is wanted, no, extremely NEEDED. Thanks :)
You traced lines into my palms,
Dictating my future,
And rewriting my past.
You peered into my veins,
Studying them as if they were,
The...
I used to think that bubble wrap,
Was the best way to go.
That touching the world,
Through a pane of glass,
Was better than feeling the...
You are the mocha to my caramel,
The fire to my ice.
You are the dragonfruit to my mango,
The bite to my bruise.
You put the sweetness...
Flames coursing through my veins,
Earthquakes in my hands,
This isn't from a coffee kick,
No adrenaline rush,
Just you.
Passionate....
The glass glints as my window opens,
When the light streams in,
My whole world brightens,
But with the light comes shadows.
Dark, hidden...