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Tue, 03/11/2014 - 21:52 -- nidegwu

What would I change ?

The world....

so that children would be fed

hate would be dead

and love can wed

so that promises could be kept

and tears wouldn't be wept

but where dream's leapt

so that those who work

will get their perk

and not be driven berzerk

so that daddys would come home

where mother's can to come

and foundation's can foam

so that war's wouldn't be fought

but peace and forgiveness could be learned and taught

and criminals caught

this world has problems

but to be flawless

what would we change ?

 

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