In This World of Hatred

Tue, 08/04/2015 - 02:31 -- daole

In this world of hatred, I choose to stick with love.

Rather than giving in to darkness, I will rise above.

In this world of hatred, I choose to find joy,

Because my determination cannot be destroyed.

In this world of hatred, I choose to promote peace,

With hope that violence will cease.

In this world of hatred, I choose to uphold others,

Because an honorable man defends his brothers.

Every day, society attempts to fill me with hate,

But I refuse to condemn myself to this miserable fate.

Though the world can be so cold,

I will forever stay bold.

In this world of hatred, I choose to stick with love.

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
My country
Our world

Comments

dandiiandiiful

I like this. It reminds me of judgment--you know, he's too this, or she's too that... everyone loves to judge and criticize others, without ever having walked in their shoes.

I usually just say, "If he's annoying, then so are you--you've annoyed me plenty of times. And I'm annoying. Everyone's annoying. Get over it." 

But sometimes I find myself falling into that same judgmental trap, and I think this poem is a great way to remind myself what I believe in--that everyone is equal, and that I should fill my heart with what matters (love, gentleness, kindness), rather than trivialites that hurt others (annoyance, judgement, callousness). Thank you.

daole

Thank you so much. It means so much to me that you enjoyed my poem. Wishing you all the best!

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