Where Our Love Goes
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As we grow stronger our love tears apart,
seeing you with other people tears me apart,
the love I have for you is amazing,
but honey you will never notice ;
Im the only girl who actually cared
ans you pushing me away makes me feel , feel like I am losing you
you are the one I love but how can you not see
I wait for you everyday to bring me happiness
but no instead you leave not realizing I love you
we fight we break up we make up , when is it all going to stop?
Every minute of the day I wish you were here
as you go off into war my heart will always be with you
fight for me fight for you fight for us because in the end
I will always love you
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LizPoetry
nice poem.
lizardoa21
Great piece full of emotion what would top it off would just be revision.
Such as on line six the first word i don't know what it was supposed to be or on line ten comas would be helpful for a reader. But it really is a eautiful piece revision is just part of the process . Looking forward to reading more from you.