What Eats the Soul

What eats the soul,

Goes unnoticed,

Without a fight.

 

What attacks the soul,

Is noticed immediately, 

For the damage it causes is too great to not be noticed.

 

What timids the soul,

Goes unnoticed by you,

But is noticed by your surroundings.

 

What uproars the soul,

Is what goes against beliefs,

You fight your point till you can't any longer.

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world
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Comments

sf21

I feel like this really relates to how I see the world and me with it, just like how you wrote it. 

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