wet kisses

nipples staring at me like eyes watching my next move
wet kisses
surprise of the pleasure 
embracing the moment
 
through touches
and rubs
body shaped of an hour glass
that is genuine than a model with fake implants
 
Landing hard on her back
in a bed that eases tension
where her muscles are relax
looking up at the ceiling
saying last minute prayer
no mami, i won't hurt you
 
Now dress ripped off
thong torn off
legs wrapped around my back
your body is my kingdom
 
never left astray
Aromatic smell that already set the mood
Of her womanhood, 
I tune her body not for a warm-up
Resonance of echoes chanting my name like the people's champ
fulfilling desires of me and only me
can say that she is my treasure that was once another man's trash
 
 
Guide that inspired this poem: 
Word Warriors 1: Feedback- The Poetic Kind!

Comments

Angelwith1wing

10 years ago

I like that you are not talking about having sex with your girl, but making love to her. Most people would have taken this poem from a lustful point of view, but I didn't. You are just showing your love for her and how you would be protective and careing for her all of her days with you. Though she was some other "man's trash", in the words of Bruno Mars she will always and forever will be your "treasure". God bless the both of y'all on the journey together. Keep writing on my friend:)!!!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

10 years ago

this is a poem of intimacy, not something casual

it's about enjoyment, not something cheap

its about words that  have meaning, not useless usages

thank you for luv and support

check out my othe rpoems

Soulae

10 years ago

This is beautiful.

Some guys don't know how to talk about intimacy.

You definitely nailed it by just giving your perspective.

Love it.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

10 years ago

this is a poem of sensuality, and not sexuality

the idea is about expressing intimacy where a woman feels like a person, rather than trash

glad you enjoyed it

continue to read my work

have you written recent poems?

42596tay

9 years ago

love love love this

 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you for the luv and support

check out my other poems i wrote

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741