wet kisses

nipples staring at me like eyes watching my next move

wet kisses

surprise of the pleasure

embracing the moment

through touches

and rubs

body shaped of an hour glass

that is genuine than a model with fake implants

Landing hard on her back

in a bed that eases tension

where her muscles are relax

looking up at the ceiling

saying last minute prayer

no mami, i won't hurt you

Now dress ripped off

thong torn off

legs wrapped around my back

your body is my kingdom

never left astray

Aromatic smell that already set the mood

Of her womanhood,

I tune her body not for a warm-up

Resonance of echoes chanting my name like the people's champ

fulfilling desires of me and only me

can say that she is my treasure that was once another man's trash

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Comments

Angelwith1wing

9 years ago

I like that you are not talking about having sex with your girl, but making love to her. Most people would have taken this poem from a lustful point of view, but I didn't. You are just showing your love for her and how you would be protective and careing for her all of her days with you. Though she was some other "man's trash", in the words of Bruno Mars she will always and forever will be your "treasure". God bless the both of y'all on the journey together. Keep writing on my friend:)!!!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

this is a poem of intimacy, not something casual

it's about enjoyment, not something cheap

its about words that have meaning, not useless usages

thank you for luv and support

check out my othe rpoems

Soulae

9 years ago

This is beautiful.

Some guys don't know how to talk about intimacy.

You definitely nailed it by just giving your perspective.

Love it.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

this is a poem of sensuality, and not sexuality

the idea is about expressing intimacy where a woman feels like a person, rather than trash

glad you enjoyed it

continue to read my work

have you written recent poems?

42596tay

9 years ago

love love love this

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you for the luv and support

check out my other poems i wrote

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