War

People Fighting

People Lying

Something's wrong with this uniting

Our flag is going down

Their flag is going up

 All I hear is bombs blowing up

Blood is all around

 Irap people are going down

This is our town

                             Crying......

Daddy's not coming home

See this war it's all a big mess....

.......So lets end it, and give it a rest....

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i can feel your surge of ending violence

i understood your feeling about having peace

how can we change the world unless we change ourselves

great job

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