A Walk To Remember


I pry my eyes open to see

a strength beyond my own

keeping me locked in behind

a blanket yet unknown


This force that hides my thoughts, my life

from ones i love and dont

a mascarade in lifes parade

participate? I wont.


A spiral down into the midst

of my minds silly game

a figured dark, and black as day

a puppet i cant tame


So go along this path, i must

and where it ends, ill find

but who i am, at the end

is niether me, nor mine






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