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Fri, 05/31/2013 - 15:32 -- lyp4

who says we can't have a picnic at night
the stars and moon are just as pretty
and all the critters will be asleep so we won't have to worry about them stealing our goodies
and i could lay on your naked body
and you could caress mine
and the fireflies feeling generous would come over and sing us a lullaby
and the trees will have a hard time deciding what's more beautiful
us or the sky

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Cloudie

Wow. Amazing <3

Cloudie

Wow. Amazing. I loved it.

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