Toxicity

Now for inside, kids play and whisper,

outide, the choking air and swing-sets, abandoned.

Would I change

states, foolhardy, of excesses and indifference?

Regarding

indifference and excesses of foolhardy states

change, I would.

Abandoned swing-sets and air choking the outside,

whisper and play kids,inside for now.

 

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