Titled, Validation.

Are we all not burning?

In the fire of reasoning.

I wake up to prepare for a regular day,

And even then i found myself drowning, 

In the thoughts of dismay.

I looked at myself in the mirror so blur,

I felt it was not the mist set on it,

Rather my soul.

I tried to quickly clean up,

Even then i was not satisfied

So i turned to another mirror again,

To check it it was still there?

This is what we do with people too,

From one to another,

We run for checks, collecting ideas,

Ideas about us, from others?

Are you not tired?

I certainly am. 

This poem is about: 
My community

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