Thinking on Eggshells

The thought of someone else having what I had invades my concious and tampers with the already imbalanced chemicals, further poisoning my mind, causing me to act irrationally. Everything shuts down and I reach a level never attained. My emotions errupt at an all time high, I cannot deal with these thoughts, and yet they barge their way in every second, every minute, every hour of the day. And I cannot express this to you, because I don't think you'll ever understand how much you affect me, even when you're not around...


MVP-Most Valuable Poet

powerful message that needs to be awaken

if this person does not understand the impact of its rupture, then imprison your frustrations, and insanity with peace, and love

i sense that you put all your emotions when you wrote this poem

keep writing, keep building

let's collaborate in wriitng a poem together.....


Thank you so much for your feedback, I would love to collaborate on something, just let me know what you wanna write about

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

let's right about true feelings/sensuality

what do you think?


Sounds good, you start it off so I can get a feel for it first and we'll go from there

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

ladies 1st..........i'm a gentleman


Lol ok ok give me a little time to come up with something

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

sure, no problem

let me know when you finish your verse

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