Sweet or Sour?

Thu, 12/05/2024 - 01:46 -- mango.1

Am I sweet?

I feel like you have the wrong notion

Im a sour bite with sparks beneath your eye lids as your mouth waters and your teeth slightly grind 

You suck in your drool as the tanginess eases

It hurts a bit but in the end, your gums crave more

It's your own saliva that's you taste after the sting making the experience sweet

This is what I am like.

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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