United States
41° 10' 22.4796" N, 81° 26' 19.9896" W

Broken perfection, Hell slips into Heaven
Sin crashes, and its fire causes damage
Touching every man and all his possessions

Burning flesh
Searing hearts
Breaking wills

Skin swelters into scales, slowly baking
As your lungs inhale poisonous air,
That sizzles with your hate and fear

The only escape is light
Which fades as you approach it,
The darkness proceeds to encroach in

You succumb to your choking
It’s hopeless


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