Success

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Success


As I stand alone,


on this mesmerized Earth,


I think about my future


and how much it is worth.


I try to get the best


out of any opportunity that comes my way.


I learn from it,


and then determine if it has any effect on what the future has to say.


I take my opportunity,


and let people here my every last word.


For as I give them out,


my main purpose is for me to be heard.


 


I want to grow up,


and be successful in life.


Hopefully, one day I will have two kids


and an independent wife.


I hope my kids will grow up


and be more successful than what I will become.


And live their life,


stay safe, and have fun.


 


People that I meet,


are always impressed by my appearance.


They say that I seem professional,


intelligent, and coherent.


It makes me feel important,


and that my life is going somewhere.


It has me wondering, where would I go,


and how would I get there.


The reason is because my enlightment, strategies, and personality


is what makes me the best,


and my positive attitude, along with God


leads me to my success.


 


                                        -Oscar McClain


 


 

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College


Once i go to college,


I will get my education.


I would neither second-guess myself,


nor fall upon hesitation.


 


I want to become successful in life,


and live my dream.


Hopefully, become a millionaire


and bless unfortunate families.


 


In order to acheive that goal,


I have to go to college.


Learn as much as I can,


and try to maintain all of the knowledge.


Then, I would further it,


and use it for the greatest.


Once I get to my dream,


I will thank God because I made it.


 


But, it all starts with COLLEGE!!!


 


 

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