Success

Sun, 03/16/2014 - 15:30 -- Saporah

I refuse to be knocked down,

you will never see me on the ground.

If i'm down, i will rise,

better, stronger, and wiser with no tears in my eyes.

 

Success is all i see,

with God by my side i can win.

The world is cold and full of hatred i now believe,

but with my master's hands on me, i know i can do it.

 

Watch my feet work like i'm on a court,

dribbling challenegs like it's my favorite sport.

Too bad for the people who doubted,

i truly will pity you when you see i've conquered it.

Succes

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