Smoke

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Smoke swiriling, twirling in the air

Never solid never there.

Like a whisper in your hair

Swirling, twirling in the air.

 

All alone but surronded

Always floating never grounded;

Sorrows stacked and counted

All alone, surronded.

 

Always watching ,

Never catching,

Ideas always hatching

Forever and ever, always watching.

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