Silent Crys

"My crys are silent

I am not violent

But still you break me

This pain I'm taking,

Once it was yours

But then you locked the doors

In front of me and them

But every now and then

I see the deep breaths you're taking

All the bad choices you are making

You are not a bully

You hurt just like me

Once, in your memories

You thought your pain was ever lasting

Couldn''t see the shadow you were casting

But maybe this is a blessing

Maybe it's willpower we are testing

But it's our souls with which we're messing

Well, I think we learned our lesson

Some limits aren't  meant for pressing."

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pleasee tell me how to improve my poetry~Seawolf

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