Shoes

Sun, 11/18/2018 - 06:29 -- Aavi

You had your shoe 

I had mine 

I tried to walk with your shoes on

Then i changed the shoes

And did it again and again

My shoes are lost now and i found myself searching for them 

I compromised with the shoes i again felt comfortable in and kept on.

You had your shoe

I had mine.

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

upnorthdavid

Love the closing. Great thought expressed. Check out a piece I posted called A LIFE SURRENDERED

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