Shining pathway

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Traveling companionless through the dark snow 

Lonely as a ghost wondering around

A black chasing shadow continues to follow

A huge treasure that can never be found

Loud laughs can be heard from far away

but yet looking clearly transparent

The eyes cry troughout the day

like a child who cannot find his parent

God says everyday is a new start

Suddenly, a bright light starts to shine

A unite family will never fall apart

Something that with words, can't be described

They will be there to keep you strong

The only one's who will remain all lifelong.

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