oh This Morning

I felt it

felt it coming 


Either good or bad..

I couldn't tell

if I'd be mad

but that fell


If it falls, it breaks

thats the risk

you must   must make

words don't matter

i just let them shatter

it Wasn't a mistake



and i was free

i was right

now I can be

the winner tonight


and I am free

I Am Right

I can live

another night


knowing i did it

i did my best

i put up a fight

when everything went wrong

I Was Going Right









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well done

well said

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