Reaction

I shout your name
And you are silent
I touch your hand
But still you do not embrace
Through all my attempts of breaking through
You never moved or gave me face
So instead
I shouted at a mountain peak
And an echo i did hear
Then when i leapt and jumped for joy
Snowy mounds began to grow near
An avalanche reaction
To your brooding emptiness
Yet still the look of you
Is still what most i miss

This poem is about: 
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