Proposition (Proposal part 2)


Now, may I love you evermore

through space and endless time?

The thought of life without you might

keep me from another rhyme.

So will you give me the honor

of using your left hand?

I need a place to put this ring,

and your finger does outstand.

I love you from the fading light,

to the breath of dawn,

I love you true with all my might,

even above a burning star.

So stand by me forever, Babe,

and let me in your heart,

Let us be together forever,

and never far apart.

Though some distance might cleave our bodies,

and give us a mighty start,

Just remember the distance is temporary,

And you'll always live in my heart.



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