Poem for Spock

Mon, 05/20/2013 - 00:29 -- chief

Location

95521
United States
40° 52' 49.9332" N, 124° 5' 14.91" W

I am a lump
of carbon
and this is
my poetry
the logical
argument for
absurdism
the spinning
drunk of the
yin and yang
I left San Diego
and my favorite
Zeppelin T was
covered in vomit
but I stumbled
to my feet
and shouted
I will be great

Comments

RH Penned

I like this! But the spacing doesn't agree with my eyeballs, personally. I'm sure it's great for you!

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