A Play on a Play on Words





When the tides change


I'll be free


to drown among my people


in the ancient lands of nowhere


nowhere you would go


with a head upon my hat


and feet upon my shoes


it's time to go inside


to survive 


the cold of the air conditioning


in my room it's harsh living


with the lights turned off


no one makes a sound


except the pitter patter of my soul


across the aluminum roof of my mind


like raindrops in your eye


all you are is a blurred image


thoughts once clear


are now hard to see


I have to retrieve my telescope


just to see you


still leaves me empty inside


'cause I think it's my fault


that I have no idea


 but I don't know what to think


or where to begin


so I just sit and wait


for the tide to come in.


 

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