A Place With No Love.

To my love, i am like a king with no crown a knight with no honor a warrior with no praise a smith with no hammer, a child with no toy, a brain with no thought, like a woman that is childless. like a father with no heir, hands without feet bald without hair. a place with no love is no place for me a place with no love is all i see, a place with no love why this happen to me, a place with no love she can’t see how much she’s meant to me. i once said i miss you you gave me know answer, now i say love you? still! you gave me the same answer. the fact still remain a place with no love is all i see let mother earth embrace me let my father speak knowledge unto me let my daughter due call to me let her tears comfort me. you love me yesterday then later you refused to show your love to me today, then let me wallow in my misery all alone , make love to sorrow but my journey is narrow. i must go now never thought when i say i love you and all i get back is the moment of silence but lo i still wouldn’t let anything get in the way of me proposing to you and marrying you.

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