One Year Ago Right Now


One year ago right now,

Their hearts were still beating,

Their lungs, still breathing.

But one year ago today,

Two precious lives were taken away.

Midnight, September Seventeenth.



This poem is so short but I want you to know that it is still deeply passionate and definitely expresses the heartache and rememberance of the two who have passed. I pass my greatest condolances for your loss, and hope that you have also written poems about the times you have been happy with these people you cared about so dearly. Thank you for sharing this with the community.


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