Oh my
There are plenty and plenty of devastating moments in my life.
Being bullied, oh god, death of people whom I sooo dearly loved.
But if someone were to ask me which was the worst one
I would automatically say that it was the exact moment that you left.
Yeah, I still remember everything I felt in that moment, and oh,
I don't ever want to live through that ever again.
-m.c.-
Please come back
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WordSmith_15
I apologize for those experiences (if they are lived ones). Good poem. I like the way you lead up to the pain of them leaving.
I usually believe that less is more, but not in this case. "I would automatically say that it was the exact moment that you left." This lines hits hard. I feel like the poem just got started and then two lines down, it's over. It feels incomplete.
As always, keep writing so I can keep reading =)