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Sun, 09/28/2014 - 15:55 -- qwegill

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62901
United States
37° 43' 39.99" N, 89° 12' 53.4204" W
62901
United States
37° 43' 39.99" N, 89° 12' 53.4204" W

Off

 

You fell off,

No, not off the edge of earth,

Not off the bull you so daringly struggle to keep hold of,

You fell off your bike into a puddle of sin,

Now you strangle in tangles

And gasp for air as wet clothes drip with the grasp of your flesh,

You fell off,

But did you get back up?

 

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