We were both Oceans, deep vast and blue

You didn't notice me, but all I saw was you

I carved your name into the edge of the world

Every thought of you creating a ripple in my pulse 

You just wanted someone to know of your depths

But the deeper I got the more we became mixed

And out blues and our waved crashed into one

But you no longer loved the Ocean we had become

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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