that is not strong enough

she's pretty, i'll say - 

the one who 

holds your heart.

ruby locks and porcelain

skin; your bronze to her

pallor holds a beauty even

i admire. 

a walking contrast down 

the street - 

but maybe bronze and i together

is just as good as bronze 

and she.


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