to my wife someday

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to my lovely wife (someday)

it was alot to ask when i wrote this

at times, there was a sense of agony

and even trivial when putting together this poem

but the happiness i feel in offering this to you

is not a handout like a beggar conning people for loose change

when i set this task for myself

i'm very aware that down the memory lanes of verses

with elegant, bias taste

poet of all time arrange rhymes that sound more feiry than a cannonball

with much respect and humility

i wrote this poem out of love

i gave this poem emotions of purity

in which my words penetrate to your body

 

walking along the boardwalk or on beaches

along hidden lakes on the other side of the shores

latitudes take away from the breezes

showered with particles of water

at that very moment

i built up lumbers of words piled with love

only i know how to express it

in which you will melt like butter

in your lovely eyes

i adore and gaze to

now that  i declare my foundation in defining my love i have for you

i surrender my pride to you

because you reminded me that you love me for me

 

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Comments

Miss Independent

I'm sure she'll enjoy your heart spilled on a page for her...someday :)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

im sure she will someday

thanks 4 support

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