my sister threw a partyshe

my sister threw a party

she is going to france

living there for a year

she said she wanted

to say goodbye to her friends.

 

my  brother drinks,

he is underage

he used to do drugs

and i know he still does pot,

chews snuff and takes pills.

 

he parties every night

my parents know,

that he drinks and he smokes

but all they say

"don't do it on our property."

but my brother is stupid

 

that or he doesnt give a shit,

we find half burned beer cans

nestled in the fire place.

and bottles of spit

next to his bed.

 

my sister asked

my brother to move

the beer cans so

her guests wouldnt have to look at them.

 

 he screamed no

that there was no point.

continued to argue

continued to fight.

 

my sister ended up

picking out the cans

because my brother

is a complete idiot.

 

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