my love to inspire young people is endless

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i have the pleasure to know all of you since you were freshmans in high school

where it all started

to see you guys evolve for better and worse

i accepted you for the young people you became today

the fact that over 100 seniors were on track to graduate

that's incredible

incredible

expectations were much higher because of the creative minds you possess

and there was a sense of unity

but what happened

you flopped

there was too many cliques

there was too many bickering, complaining, and moping

and yet, when it came to vote for senior president

who did you voted for?

someone that baked everyone a cup cake

i'm not knocking that at all

it was a smart tactic-was it moral?

there were mix opinions about it

no matter, you all voted for this person

and what was accomplish? 

breast cancer awareness for the month of october-i applaud the effort

in hopes that as a class, you all build off your creative minds and expand one's horizon

what happened months later? nothing

there was no commitment

i didn't see a unify class that was bout it

it was all talk and no action

it just left a sour taste to my mouth

more disappointed than that

seems like all of you have an indifferent mentality where nobody cares

someone asked if i was going to the senior award ceremony

i said no!!!!!!!!!! why?

i was uninspire

you don't see that in other schools, there became a community 

our school, we look like scattered roaches crawling all over the place without nowhere to go

still busy trying to find our way

don't get me wrong

my love to inspire young people is endless

have nothing but love

but until you become as one

all i'll see is a cycle of ignorance that will never be recycle

 

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charlena cole

Love this sometimes as people young we do fell to see whats more important in life. You made me feel you so I really like this peice because I really hear your voice I also would like to have a voice that's really heard and understood so if you could please check out some of my work in need of some feedback thanks I know you maybe a busy man but I would really appreciate it

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charlena cole

Love this sometime our young people do fell to see what more important in life. You made me feel you so I really like this peice I love it because I really hear your voice I also would like to have a voice that's really heard and understood so if you could please check out some of my work in need of some feedback thanks I know you maybe a busy man but I would really appreciate it

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