my body aches

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

tectonics plates saw
back and forth
uneven and faulty indeed
they grind, rough edges
nothing smooth as age approaches now
more determine to give a new physique
more uneven , more i must rise
makes me shiver, squinty
i rub my shoulders, and
knotty scalp with soft fingertips
tapping hard, the base of my skull
echo that travels through my hard bone body

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

wherever i go my brother, the weather doesn't wear away from my poetic flow lol

the tectonic plate imagery was about a symboll of me in this particular case

thank you for your comments-im very humble by it

i can read your poems and provide feedback

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