My Beginning

Tue, 08/12/2014 - 03:48 -- AK

I feel cold; I'm suffocating.

I cried as loud as I could.

I didn't know that "outside" was bright.

Why does everyone look so glad?

It's unfair! I'm the only one who feel sad.

Before I realized,

I was crying as loud as I could.


I feel empty; I don't feel comfortable.

I don't have patience, so

I cried as loud as I could.


Why are you crying?

But you are smiling.

Are you happy?

I reached your cheeks;


My hands were too small to stop

the trickling water from overflowing.



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