Music

Music is the thing that makes me light.

Seriously, nothing takes me higher.

I feel it in my mind, dancing through the night,

it fills me with an inescapable fire.

 

When I'm feeling down it comes along

and it picks me up off of the ground.

My heart is overflowing with the song.

There's nothing else when music's around.

 

If no one was left; they had all gone away,

I wouldn't care; I wouldn't despair.

My music would come and brighten the day,

cause that's just how it is; that is its way.

Comments

grestasa miller

-I Think Your Poem Is Amazing, It Has Its Own Flow, And Has Its Own Voice. I Also Feel The Same Way About Music . Keep Writing, Never Stop ! :)

bgrundy10

Thank you!! :)

mrugg1567

Beautiful! I love how you made your point so clear in so few words yet its still powerful! You really show your emotion towards music and how it relates to your dealings with others as well as problems you face. While reading this poem i was able to feel what you feel when you listen to music. Bravo, well done! :)

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