"Motherland is superior to Heaven"

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In the lap of Himalayan range it lies,

still I remember when I close my eyes .

because of melodious voice of the raven ,

My mother and motherland is superior to heaven.

 

Beautiful home under Asia ,

Creats the native sickness and touches my heart .

My country is known as thunder and dragon ,

Mother and motherland is superior to heaven.

 

Dancing river in box of memory,

Cypress is still waiting for me .

Always, I remember the image of takin*,

My mother and motherland is superior to heaven.

* Takin: National Animal of Bhutan

    Name:Lila Chamlagai

    School: Springfield Central High School, Springfield Massachusetts 

     Class of 2015.

 

 

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