Moments

We have our moments, lets get over it, and smile in those moments. i want to stay in your moment of life. so, in the meant time, maybe your dream time, even in between time, let me hold you down. and when the sunrises, let me waste your time, so you can have my time and your love can hypnotize. so i can love you, oh, how i love you.  

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jaydek611

My favorite part of this poem is that it simply expresses my love for myself. If i had the chance to show the world maybe it would convince others to love theirselves very much.

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