Love is blind

Sun, 11/24/2013 - 14:32 -- BexElle

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'love is blind'

This quote very famous, very, very famous

but for those of us who have been in love

how much of it is really floating flowers and doves

or is the quote meant to symbolise something alot deeper

as in how far we would go for the one we love

in this sense im talking about the love you feel with a keeper

the kind of love that like water cannot be explained by words

the kind of love that in on second makes you feel as free as a bird 

but within minutes makes you feel more crushed than candy

so how much of love is really blind ? 

some of us travel low and far just to find 

that one 

the one 

the only one 

Comments

brave-girl-thawing

Love the idea of going blind for love... I'd never thought about it that way before. I'd love to read more on that idea... On the other hand, I think maybe the second line could use some work. I don't know, just a suggestion. Anyway, great poem!!

- L.

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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