Loss and Gain from Rio Lane

Lover since the seventh grade

Offed himself on Rio Lane

Said he loves everything about me

Scribbled on the suicide note messily


Gross unsatisfaction from this whole ordeal

Allowed me to reflect and find a new appeal

In my sorrow, I discovered a new way to cherish

Nothing would change me like my lover that perish

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