Life Bomb

Fri, 04/19/2013 - 22:35 -- BHen

As our ears experience the melodies of violins
We can't help but surrender and fall into a beautiful trance.
The cellos flow in, adding to the mind-numbing lullaby.
An astonishing blare of orchestral symphony overwhelms our bodies.
Relieving unwanted thoughts, feelings, emotions.
It rocks us to sleep,
As our hearts make a wish that achieves the form a dream.
Giving us hope that no matter the complication,
Each melody will guide us out of this tragic bomb we call 'Life'.


MVP-Most Valuable Poet

nice rythym to this poem
like the play of words using musical instruments in connecting it to something meaninful
great job

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