The Leach

they know not a word for her feeling

nor reveal the pseudonym state of mind

Lucid images scream

high with clarity

but all is dark and neon will dance undefined

There is a lot of meaningless emotion 

overflowing from a nasty deluge

She can live in blistering memories

or steal the light

feigning what you extrude.



this is so beautiful! you use rhymes so well and keep the story on track i love it!

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