Just another bitter ex-girlfriend

Location

Slurred words

Blurred lines

Raw emotion

And cold rhymes

 

Hot desire

Left to burn

Helpless love

Still never returned

 

Betrayal, distrust

Wounds left untreated

Skin left untouched

And heart left defeated

 

Ends left loose

Issues unaddressed

Sickening voids

That arose in my chest

 

While the alcohol’s fresh…

 

I’m glad that you left

The day that I met you

I curse and regret

 

But when the sun rises

And I get sober…

 

I damn the day you declared it was over   

Comments

Jackieholder1

I send snaps your way.

bethanysue0712

That was great. So well-written. Such emotion.

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