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open your mind to challenge the brain until it's mentally drained, cock and reload for more intellectual stimulation/ mindstate that was close/mindset that alters perception/get with the new/just relate and concentrate/stay in tuned to the importance of the ny state of mind/mind is ready to release/ pull the trigger/ shots pop pop/pop off /you lost your mind once again, spiral out of control/ get in touch/ open wide/ turn it around/ clap your hands/ its all fine now face uplifted so don't stop/ please dont cry/ it’ll be alright/smash its unwanted weight of ignorance/ and take your thoughts out/ the bad ones/ that have you thinking/ you choose to do nothing with your life intellectually because you didnt succeed emphatically, academically, in the standards of society/ thats wack/ you been lied to/ I dont want that/ that one telling me that I mount to nothing with my life cause I aint make straight a’s or b’s, right../ what you doing? validating, complicating, creating blanking up perceptions/ my capability… all of the above/ You won't stop me by your distorted fabrications/ keep that crazy talk to yourself/ behind me, behind the wall where all the insecurities fall/ afterall, I got a mind, you got one too/so dont wait for intelligence to enter you/ enter ya head/ by the books/dont be shook/They don’t make you smart like the school system says/ its the opposite of whats portrayed/ if you ask me its a little patronizing/ I fed in/you reading? thats good/ I’m not knocking/ get in them books/ page after page/ chapter 1, 2, and 3/ just make sure the literary, vocabulary doesnt put you in a victim cementary/ killing whats common to your sense, stabbing at your pupils/ swerving then punching the antennas in ya noggin/ munipulation.. /”You wont be smart if you dont read these pages, you’ll fail at life, just forget it,” The teacher said./ That’s crap, thats nonsense/ I’m not bringing my ears to hear uncover, discover something that clearly ignorance, come on man thats not even true/who ever said that you are not smarter than the teachers thats in the classroom with you/ Cause You can…. liars.. Your intellect is developed by the sensitivity of your mind/brought down into your heart/Slipped from your soul/Don’t wait to be considered smart by your grades, a degree/rewrite your history/You already are/you already are the smartest/your heart is the hardest/let it flow/ just connect to yourself and give your own perspective/I bet you’ll be called intelligent/Book smarts is cool if we didn’t live in some fantasy they perceive as real life/so I don’t want that/you shouldnt either/i won't survive/you either/Only boost egos and get into a snoody college/What good is that for when you don’t have your own mindset/your own knowledge, your state of mind/ rebellious mind state, mines/ yours, using life lessons to teach you something/to enrichen from/ deep meanings have your mind leaning on creative spaces/ weird faces/ turning into a real person/ stay focus, cause you got get to know it/ the mental/ your mental/ dig in it/ its complex/ its a mess/ soulful/ imagination waiting to be touched/ I know it/ I’m not downplaying/I’m just saying, School is cool don’t get me wrong/education is important so get educated all u can/but that doesn’t validate you man/so dont let it/its not ya medication/it wont heal you after graduation/reality happens, after they call your name and you receive ya diploma/after that day you think everything is over/the world stops for you/sorry it doesnt, one bit/it keeps going/reality sets in/ life hits you/so step into the real world and find things out for yourself.

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Soulae

 I love this.. This really does something to my heart, to know my work is inspiring you to put your own twist to it. It's an honor. Your an amazing writer and the top poet on this website so for you to love my stuff, humbles me so much, to know I'm doing something right. Thank you.. We need to collab again on a piece. 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

it's an honor to form friendhips through poetry

your style of poetry is always fly.............i'm humble everytime, a person is influence by my work

i'm also inspire by amazing writers like yourself to use your imagination is always innovative

it's that drive that keeps me going and writing

and thank you for the recognition of the empowerment of my poetry

 

let's collaborate on another piece

what did you have in mind?

Soulae

How about we write about our reflections, like looking into a mirror writing about what we feel in hearts, things that no one can see but us, just something simple.. What do I think, anything you have in mind?

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thats a wonderful idea ariel

email me at velezjrrobert@gmail.com

write your verse and i'll compliment the poem

ladies 1st :)

Moyy

I feel Like I know you

Through poetic power and relatability to my life and why poetry is the best way to express. For the love of music. Keep up the good work. I'll work my way up someday and hope to collab with inspiring people like yourself. Everyone has their time. Thank you

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

hi moyy

thank you for reading my poem

poetry is a way to connect with poets/writers/artists

check out my other poems i wrote

 

if you like. lets collaborate on a poem together

what do you say?

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